Hey man! Well first, Welcome to NG! This a pretty good song! I don't make songs but just for starters you could add a higher pitched melody to the song kinda as a "finale."
Also you could try giving it some more shape as far as to how loud it is in places to make it start out, reach a middle and ether climax and end or climax and wind down to an end. There are lots of ways to make songs more interesting so be creative and do what feels good to you! Music is an expression of who you are! Again great start keep at it and all!
The end is near so kill some virtual dudes!!
Thanks for the advice. Yeah I know, it doesn't really go anywhere but I lost my inspiration for it about a week in, and thats as good as it was gonna get, so yeah..
Anyways, I have been working on rising to a climax and falling and stuff, so hopefully my next one will be a little fuller and more interesting to listen to.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.