kinda slack off on the melody at 1:13, the two sections didnt really blend in. i think up to the first minute is techno at its finest. will prolly tweak the melody at after the first minute and will eventually repost. may also changeup/tweak the into lead. my favorite part was transition @ 0:23-0:25 with a headset, well all of the song sounds good on a headset, takes you into a ambient mood.
to me, this sounds good for now.
Agreed
I completely agree with your self-review, It sounds very good at the moment, and when you fix out all the kinks and smooth the edges my 8/10 would jump to 9.
So for now 4.5/5 <-- meaning 4
once its fixed It'd be a straight 5. Id like an update on the mastered version :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
liqourish 
