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bro if you are gona post something, at least make it long enough to be worth listening to. the melody wasn't to bad, it was just very simplistic. plus the melody just loops and repeates its self in different instrument.
if you want to make this better, you should lengthen it, add more harmony, and add more to the melody. AND NO SKIMPING EITHER. don't be a minimalist........ also, dynamics go a long long looooong way to add emotion, and character to a song.