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Wyze - Terrible

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Two separate sides of the same story:

These will be my last words that I spit to the Earth
I'll go berserk if I endure these circus jerks
Madams, sirs, I bid you ado
I wish that you knew who I am and what have you
You laugh too, but I'll make this like Iraq dude
When I set off an IED while I'm in the bathroom
I have to, go through with the plan I selected
Unexpected, I make an ungraceful exit
My heart was true but I'm somewhere I can't stand
System kicking my ass like it's Claude Van Damme
Aw man, where the fuck did I go wrong in life?
So here I'm stuck stringing along this song of strife
I was right! Avoid fights! Try to be nice!
Even gave to the third world so they could eat rice
So where the fuck is karma, it's not in this room
So at the push of this button I go out with a boom

The loss of life is a terrible thing
Worse yet when the loss is self-inflicting
It's terrible, how lives are misplaced
And how a survivor can be afraid to show his face

So slow, I move away from the phone, no!
I yell although, I know it's isn't apropos
I hurt, so I curse, but it makes it worse
Facing images of my father riding in a hearse
Got a call from the paramedics in emergency
They say that I should rush there urgently
Should I worry, or am I over analytical?
They tell me my father's there, situation critical
Caught in a blast, set off by some ass
Who took is own life, and other's as they walked past
Over 15 dead, and my dad's hanging by a thread
My drifting head, keeps trying to start arising dread
But I've got to hold on, he's got it worse by far
So I grab my keys, and run to my car
I rush as fast as I can to be by his side
But a minute before I get there my dad dies

The loss of life is a terrible thing
Worse yet when the loss is self-inflicting
It's terrible, how lives are misplaced
And how a survivor can be afraid to show his face

Where did I go, what happened to me?
A shell of the person I used to be.
No qualms to take a life ruthlessly
I'm afraid of what the world will do to me

The loss of life is a terrible thing
Worse yet when the loss is self-inflicting
It's terrible, how lives are misplaced
And how a survivor can be afraid to show his face

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I loved the song man but...

I feel like you took 1 step forward and 2 steps back with your delivery. The lyrics and the flow were fine but your delivery still needs work man. There has to be a consistent sound to your voice. I know you're trying to get the emotion right but the way you did it just sounded weird. Either way man, good track. Don't give up, I like what you're doing but just work on your delivery and you're set. OH and also get a new mic lol. Stay up.

Blasphem-E responds:

Once I get a new job I'll pick up a new mic. As for the delivery, you are completely right, I was attempting to get the emotion into the track.
Thanks for the thoughts.

2.76 / 5.00 (+ 0.29)

Very deep lyrics dude, i like them. My fav. part in this song is the whole 2nd verse. You ended it very nice. Good shizzle dude!

5/5
Emdee

Blasphem-E responds:

Glad you liked it dude

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Uploaded
Jan 28, 2010
5:18 AM EST
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3.4 MB
3 min 44 sec

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