You have potential to make some awesome tuneage! You've got some cool movement going on here with the hihats and the sounds you used... work on packing your track with more epicness! Layer another melody in where you have the Vanguard arp and overall try to make it more awesome. Add some distinguishable pads perhaps? Idk.
5/5 and 10/10 for encouragement and cause I can! :)