nice arpeggios

very cool interacting lead lines. The main one kinda sounds like its played from the buttons of a phone lol

Problems:

1. Repetitive. Theres very little variety and my brain kinda gets tired of the beeps after a while. Try switching it up; add some new sections to the song aka verse chorus intro etc

2. No low end. As far as I can tell, theres no bassline. This makes the track sound incomplete and a dry

Dont get me wrong, I think this is great for a second submission. It takes countless hours of fucking up and getting accustomed to writing songs before really good stuff starts coming out. Keep at it!