Hmm.. the riff is good, but it really doesn't build up to anything good. I was expecting it to build up to something really heavy with a great beat, it deserves that, but it just keeps wavering and not building up, a climax where it just goes BOOM into that riff with full guitars and a crazy beat would sound awesome.
I would like to try something with this, with your permission, so if you get this, contact me via AIM: SerionBlue or MSN: email@example.com
Thankies! Its quite good by the way, just needs a little more structuring.
pretty good work
i wouldnt really consider it heavy metal but its still pretty great
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.