I think it's very good but too long. There are a lot of good melodies but a bit repetitive. I think you have to do it a bit faster as a sampler. So I like it but it's too monotone.
Keep up the good work!
Csucskos
Author Comments
So far my most ambitious electronic piece. Rendered in Melody Assistant with Gold Sounds. EDIT: remastered in Audacity with boosted bass and the whole track generally amplified, but probably still not finished with this project.
Thank you for listening.
=================
Visit my website at: http://www.bentibbetts.net/
Follow this Newgrounds account at: http://benjamintibbetts.newgrounds.com/follow
=================
BenTibbetts responds:
OK. Thanks very much for listening.
Nice Melody Throughout!
Hey Ben! I think this has a lot of spirit which is great for dance music. Your writing style would create a really unique sound for the genre!
I'm not sure this is quite dance music yet though. Most every dance song I can think of has a driving beat in the background. You have one in the background, but it's really, really difficult to hear. It gets clearer as the track goes on, but people looking for dance music would probably not find this to their taste until they got a few minute into the track. My recommendation would be to listen to some of the original electronic dance music written (check out Robert Miles) and compare your tracks to them. I found Robert Miles a huge inspiration when I was starting out!
This is a great start Ben, I love that you're experimenting with other genres!
David
BenTibbetts responds:
Thanks David. Robert Miles... OK. Yes, I really need to boost that bass somehow. I'll work on it.
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
BenTibbetts 
Licensing Terms
You may not use this work for any purposes.
