I think it's very good but too long. There are a lot of good melodies but a bit repetitive. I think you have to do it a bit faster as a sampler. So I like it but it's too monotone.
Keep up the good work!
OK. Thanks very much for listening.
Nice Melody Throughout!
Hey Ben! I think this has a lot of spirit which is great for dance music. Your writing style would create a really unique sound for the genre!
I'm not sure this is quite dance music yet though. Most every dance song I can think of has a driving beat in the background. You have one in the background, but it's really, really difficult to hear. It gets clearer as the track goes on, but people looking for dance music would probably not find this to their taste until they got a few minute into the track. My recommendation would be to listen to some of the original electronic dance music written (check out Robert Miles) and compare your tracks to them. I found Robert Miles a huge inspiration when I was starting out!
This is a great start Ben, I love that you're experimenting with other genres!
Thanks David. Robert Miles... OK. Yes, I really need to boost that bass somehow. I'll work on it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.