LOVE IT!

good job i myself make trance with fruity loops check my music out if you like and again nice job!

Nice!

I like the song overall, it gets a little repetitive at the end, but I don't care.

Controlled, but a little repetitive.

It's not bad - this piece is a little repetitive, as the beat rarely changes. You've done some decent work with the melody and got it all sorted to make a nice sound, but I feel that it needs something else done to the beat. Perhaps take the beat out in places for a few seconds, to allow the rest of the track to shine through, perhaps.

With how it all sounds together, this isn't something I'd expect to hear in a club, there needs to be more in the way of in your face beat, melody and perhaps even vocals. That might be what you're missing as an inspiration to the piece as a whole.

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Good bass, a little repetitive towards the end

Very nice bass. The deep sound is pretty amazing. I also like how it starts off with the bass tuned all the way down in the intro and then it slowly starts to get more and more bassy until the "main kick" sets in.

The melodies you put in every now and then are pretty nice. They keep the song from getting too repetitive, because the main beat gets a little bit boring towards the end.
I hoped you would let a melody play for longer once you introduced them, instead of only letting them play for a few seconds and then stop them again.
I think the song would sound better if there was a main melody in the second part of the song.

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what can i say

this is one bangin track my friend, I especially like that I can turn up the volume without sounds rippingg my eardrums, but if I play the song a low volume it still has enough punch to keep everything interesting. That, in my eyes, is a major accomplishment.

I would like to hear some kind of edit with a vocal line in it... but perhaps that's a little too commercially viable for your taste?