Good, and bad!
There are a lot of good bits in this, but some of it (Not much) clashes a lot and sounds suspiciously like random button mashing in a particular key.
Nothing really to say as any attempt to "fix" any part of this would ruin what makes it good.
I don't know what is wrong with JonOfTheShred I think its awesome and I just came here and started listening. Good beat too.
If you read his blog post, you'll see that he's just butthurt because his music doesn't make the Top 30, and he was going to give abusive reviews to musicians who get to where he can't.
Long story short, if you ignore the troll, it goes away. :)
Haha, pretty neat song! I liked it. The bongos that come in at 1:31 really saves the song for me. It's cute. Not in a condescending way... in a cute way.
Without reading how the song is represented by you, I'd say it reminds me of leaving childhood. The happiest times of your life slowly drifting away. You learn that life isn't as simple as you thought it was.
I found it quite moving/touching. Good job. to be touched by an 8-bit sounding song really means alot. Nice writing. Do me a favor and return the favor with my music sometime! I'd appreciate it! Thanks!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.