i do not like the snare at all, that needs to be changes, you also need to add some more hats. i would compress and eq the drums. i would get some more sounds going for the hook, instead of the same loop playing through out the whole thing. also try getting some pads and chords in there. try getting the song mastered, you could have a decent song.
(don't take this personally i ask everyone) was this all done on a computer or did you use real instruments in the creation of this song.
Great piano mix.
Love listening to this.
excellent dude.loved it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.