I like it - but a little short
I think that there is certainly potential here, with the way that you've set the track going. The sound quality was a little low, since I had to turn it up quite loud to get a volume that I could listen to properly. As the piece itself progressed, there was a good amount of metal elements in there, but it didn't really bind together as it should have.
I think that the lead guitar solo should have been made longer and more aggressive - this is a cover, but you are allowed poetic licence on what you do to it. Fading out halfway through what I perceived as the tune was a little weak as well, so extrapolate it and give us more of a tune.
Some lyrics wouldn't go amiss either, since they can really change the sound of a song.
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