This can only be described whit two words: Freaking Awesome!!!
Finally an industrial track in the industrial section of NG!
I can definitely hear the Reznor influences, especially with the keyboard structure completing the last half of the track.
Would have loved to hear greater clarity between the different instruments. Say the keypresses of the keyboard more like a piano press, the guitar more distorted. These aspects of greater light and dark shades is simply a personal preference, and I can see where they'd perhaps detract from the ambient cruise this track takes you on.
i like it, original, good composition, and nice ambience. A 9 and a 5 for you!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.