Where's the music?
There was nothing musical about this. No instruments whatsoever. No steady tempo in your vocals. The quality of said vocals is also sub-par. There are times when it's slower and sounds decent enough, but then you try to fit a whole bunch of syllables into one measure and it just sounds awful. Sometimes it sounds like you're whispering.
I really don't know how to review this, as there's nothing here except you talking about sauce. The song doesn't even have a clear cut message to it. It's just like you grabbed a microphone in a fit of marijuana induced inspiration and started randomly rhyming.