Wow

Very positive tune, nice, too short, though! and the bridge drums need to be louder at 1.10 ))

Youre onto something here.

This song just feels so real.

..it has one of those comirel vibes

but if u wached the pepsi streamline that song wasnt bad thats what i mean about it its good... i mean urs is good thats what im talknig about

Not bad, not bad at all.

The intro was definetely something you should be proud of. It immiedetely set the template for a great song. With a superb but slightly long build up.

The interesting beat in the background from the start was simply fantastic and added to the general atmosphere, which was yet again great. The synths which came afterwards, slowly fading in and building up, played some pretty awesome melodies, which sadly, got slightly repetitive after a while.

The drums, although slightly too faint, were quite good, varied and providing a steady beat. I particularly loved the way they mixed in with the middle section, setting off the mood brilliantly. The thing which really bugged me however was the sad lack of bass. I thought i could hear a bass playing faintly in the background, but whether it was there or not, it should definetely be louder. Originality was also quite little. Chord progressions were slightly on the generic side as was the beat. But still, the main part of the song was great. Outro was slightly abrupt but left the listener hanging, wishing for more, so great work on that behalf.

Overall, great work on most parts.

Intro/Outro = 1/1
Blend = 2/2
Mel./Transition = 2.5/3
Drums + Bass = 1.5/2
Originality = 1.5/2

Darklight17

P.S. Note that this is your judging review from Round 3 of the NGADM. Once again, its always nice to have new reviews no?

Yeap.

Epic, builds up and doesn't let down. Sound like a Christian song i once heard.