No Offense can ya get yo get yo girlfriend to sing Taylor isnt boy
not a boys voice
look ur a boy, ok? so the problem is that u need a tenors voice, not a bass voice. practice makes perfect, though. and the screamo one, was bad enough that my ears bled. i'm sorry. (But i do love taylor swift)
Not A Good Idea
First of all, I swear you ripped off a bunch from another song, especially at the intro.
The vocals aren't well done; in-fact, they are quite weak.
The instruments are very basic and boring.
Lastly, this is hardly heavy metal. The only heavy metalish part was at the death vocals.
uh dude... you belong with me by taylor swift. yeah i ripped it off, cuz its a cover. yes, the vocals are terrible. i did them, and i did them through guitar hero mic (they pop easily, so you have to sing quietly while recording). i know the drums are very bad at least cuz they were garage band loops. the guitar is cool, but there are only 2 different chord progressions in the entire song and 4 chords total. im sorry about putting in the metal section though. i didn't think this belonged in general rock, but i guess its DEFINITELY not metal.