I agree with ander3!
He is right. It is a bit odd with the staccato, musical term for the German 'holperig', but still good! Keep up the good work!
do anyone know, what "holperig" is in english?
very "holperig", i would say i german... I don't know the english word for it...
but it sounds intresting. Only a little too fast.
In my opinion- average