Hi my friend
The piano tune sounds really nice. Congrats. What the strings concerns.... Maybe it would be much nicer if you just kept the strings play single notes (like only the lead violin) instead of chords That way the simplicity of the tune would underline the somberness or sadness you want to express with it. Then I would give it a 10 :o)
Keep up the good work.
With friendly regards,
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.