music like this makes money
again, u got pro talent. the highlight dubs need to be ALOT lower. u dont rly even want to hear that you highlighted, its supposed to be more of a feeling. take it down 5-6dB from wherever the main vocals are and add moderate reverb. i love the flange on the beat's vocals, good choice. the more of an ear you develop for mixing on your own time will save you lots of money and if you give it to an audio engineer they can spend more time on spice and less on leveling and compression and all that jazz. if you dont have pro audio software like logic cubase or pro tools then use a simple editor like audacity. its not childsplay but ive had good results with it.. its what i learned on at least. also, i notice you dont use ad libs ("hey"s "what"s and "yeah"s in the background).. is that a prefrence? its not a deal breaker, but it can add some depth. sorry for writing so much but i rip my own music apart until it sounds decent... and then im still not happy with it lol. dont get me wrong its still a 10/10 but there are things that u need to mindful of if you want this to hit the radio.