I think it has potential
its basically boosting the bass in the background. to be honest, I'm begging for more body when I listen to it. Especially since this has a techno feel to it, the background beeds the power behind it, and for the mechanical beeps needs a boost of treble. Otherwise I love the flow, especially the last 30 seconds, you really can get into it. just at 1:06 it seems uncharacteristic of the flow you had and then does an abrupt stop with the drum at 1:11. it you wanna end it like that I'd suggest at least adding one more round of the pulse(1:08-1:10) before ending it to keep the flow of repatition to the end. or in the least a better fade to end. otherwise, awesome job, looking forward to the upgrades and give me a heads up when you do.