Sounds like it's all set for slightly diminished shredie-but-still-dancey guitar bit with some heavy drums for about 16 bars. Think 'I like the way you move' sound but not as crappy a guitar part. Check out Faith No More's 'Strip Search' on you tube, the bit break down right at the end where he sings ' F for fake'. Something like that would suit this really nicely!
I gave 7 because it's not finished.. But 4/5 because it's better than a 3.