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The Wake Up Jam(with lyri

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This is a previous song of mine, which I wrote some lyrics for and recorded on a crappy mic :)
It is a happy song, with a carefree message, REAL cheesey. lol Not like most rap. Anyway I hope you enjoy!


As always, reviews, ratings, criticism, suggestions, and advice are very much appreciated.
I want to know what you think!!! Don't zero bomb without letting me know why!!


Lyrics Below.


Wake up, get your clothes on and get outside
Take a step, schlep, flip into the sunlight
Gung-ho, say hello to the neighbors,
Smile, stay outside a while, do yourself a favor


Climb a tree, get that vitamin D, see what you can see
Feel free, set yourself loose,
You choose your own path, so surprise yourself
Get off your shelf, feel in high health, and high hopes
I hope you see the world, as never being the same,
You can't get this in a game, it's a shame, if you miss out,
The lame don't get out, they could if they would but sit out,
But that's because they're shit out, of luck,
So don't get stuck in, keep truckin, and if your courage needs pluckin,
then pluck it. Tell the haters suck it, leave em wonderin, why they're stuck blunderin, while you're out there doing something. hundreds of past times waiting for a plunderin, It'll take you all day to do one of them.


There's one of them now, lets hit it, we don't gotta let em know who did it
Just split, check it off the list, assist me with it,
Take it easy breathe the breeze, see the next goal and get it.
What? A business trip? FOrget it,
You know what, you got a job call in and quit it. This is it, this is my business, being free, me myself and I, and I'll miss it if I lose it,
so I use it, and live for today, enjoy myself before I put the world away

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ok ok

I overlooked this one. I can see ya put alot of effort into these lyrics. Oh yea. For a newcomer or whatever, this was well written. Pretty good mixing too. Quality could be better, but this is only NG i guess. Flows on point and beat choice wasnt too shabby either. 5/5 and 9/10

B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks! Yeah there was a lot of effort in the lyrics... it's so hard when you're actually trying to say something and not just rap about how mad your skills are... ya know? lol

Nice

Well done man. Liked the flow, beat, all that. Keep up.

B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks man!

This is seriously fucking cool

Ths is a cool song man, I LOVE that guitar, all you need is a higher quality mic and maybe some singing but yeah that beat is very well done I wasn't expecting this when i read your thread. Keep up the good work and if you wanna collaborate on some shit add my myspace, it's in my profile

B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks a lot! I have a much better mic now, a Guitar Hero one lol. It works infinitely better than the one used in this song too. Hooray!

sup homie!

hey this is good shit but the beat is whack, love the guitar and your lyrics!

Hey, I got a beat waitin for some lyrics if your down, just show me som words or send me a PM or reply dude.

you got flow dude, if you want to get noticed, hit me up!

B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks for the review. The beat is wack? That makes me sad. lol but really I wish I had some better sounds... and skills with the tools in FL studio. Alas in that field I'm a very slow learner. Thank you for the feedback and I'm glad you like the rhymes... and the sample. I'll try to improve my beats...

Haha

Kinda reminds me of 311 and Sublime

B-RadGfromOV responds:

Thanks for the review.

Credits & Info

Listens
1,987
Faves:
1
Downloads
61
Votes
7
Score
4.82 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 19, 2010
9:18 PM EST
File Info
Song
3.9 MB
2 min 8 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.