Nice for a W.I.P.

Considering this is a Work in progress as you said it was, and just a few hours of works was done, I think it sounds very neat. Sounds fit for some super hyper-active battle.

I look forward to see a complete version of this. Because it has lots of potential in my eyes.

Well, this sure is interesting..

First of all, I give you a quite low score, since this portion doesn't make it very well on its own. I really miss an intro to bring up the atmosphere a bit. I even think you should use half of the songs total length to prepare for this portion, or even more. This could work as a very powerful climax.

I hope you find my comment useful, and good luck to you!