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the VERY rough draft of a song i've been working on. I know, the singing is out of timing at times and the guitar is off at times too. deal with it. vote as you should. Zero bombers need lives. all reveiws are appreciated.

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Decent, things to improve on -

There are good and bad things about this song, I'm going to give a very critical review, so please take it in stride to becoming a better musician. As you said, all reviews appreciated.

First the good, the structure of the song works, verse/chorus wise. You also have an interesting voice, though it needs to open up a little. The lead guitar actually works very well and really helps paint the picture for a nice sounding love song. It sounds good.

As for what needs work, you need to open up your voice, it's not a bad voice and your not particularly out of tune, but it's very nasally at times, like your singing from your throat. At the moment it would work punk rock wise, but that's about it. With proper practice, you could sound great, I can hear it.

There's obviously some time issues which you mentioned, some wrong notes, and the backing guitar is out of tune a little. But you mentioned these issues so I will ignore them.

As far as lyrics go, their not particularly inspiring or clever, to me at least. It's a love song about a girls lips, hair, and not to be scared, you'll love each other forever. Their not BAD lyrics, but they don't exactly paint a interesting picture or are original to any other love song.

Also, this is under grunge, but this is more of an Acoustic/Rock Love Ballad.

Anyways, hope this gives a good idea, and I"m being really critical, keep up the good work! I rated 4/5 and 8/10.

zac11114 responds:

WEll a critical review is what i need. i appreciate it.

Thank you for the comment on song structure, as for my voice yeah. i'm not the most experianced vocalist but im learning i suppose.

Yes, another thing about my voice i didn't mention is I had been ill the day i recorded this song, i had some form of cold/chest thing. But even without it my voice would need work.

yeah, i wasnt sure about the genre.

thank you very much it was a helpful review, and thank you, i'll keep doing music and i hope to hear a review from you again one day. thanks for the rating.

Sick Picking

Is that some picking i hear in there? Not bad, its simple, but fantastic. Its a nice tune. Goes perfect with the strumming. The picking at the end was alitte funky lol. sounds like u messed up.
Lyrics are touching man. Over all its good. Keep it up. You should make a band.

zac11114 responds:

You do hear some picking, which i actually do WHILE singing when preforming it. and thanks, basics are often effective eh? Yeah, i messed up lol. but i was too lazy to correct it ha ha.

And thanks, the lyrics are about someone pretty awsome, so it's easy when you mean it ha ha. and thanks man, i will. I'm actually in two bands, one is a screamo band i sing in, and the other i dont sing. So this is kind of my way of singing and playing more mellow tunes, but i'll keep it in mind!

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Jan 18, 2010
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Genre
Grunge
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3 min 1 sec

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