you said be critical, so here it goes.
i believe that you you are using fl7 or 8, which is fine, but find a piano that will not reverb like it is doing right now. it seems like the piano is in a slightly smaller room.
Maybe try a triple kick and a double kick instead of a single and double?
fl9 mang why would i be using 7 or 8 when theres free upgrades?
I put the reverb and delay on the piano myself, I could probably spend more time fine-tuning it though.
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