I don't find any problem about this one, personally, tho I find it more as an ambient song rather than a Hip-Hop one, but that's just personal opinion. Cool one by the way, very relaxing, for now listening to it for 1 hour without getting tired of it :)
Its smooth but something's missing fantastic flow though! keep it comin!
Yeah I feelz you on that, dude. But I'll keep working on 'em!!