Your song, his review.
Nothing to add here, InvisibleObserver as already said it all :(
I'm 100% with him.
You're juste testing FL I guess, so it's ok, you've got potential, I'm sure, so don't worry.
Hope you like it.
Your song, his review.
Nothing to add here, InvisibleObserver as already said it all :(
I'm 100% with him.
You're juste testing FL I guess, so it's ok, you've got potential, I'm sure, so don't worry.
My review, your song.
Intro's with a neat synth playing a very simple/generic gated rhytmhn.
0:22 nice clean synth made for a nice contrast to openign sound. Also plays a simple melody, though the layering of the two is much more inclining to listen to.
0:31 Kick drum intro is nicely timed, but the kick itself doesn't have the greatest force behind it. I think increasing its bass a bit would be dandy.
Rest of drums are very simple, they need some alternating rhythms and rolls. Their very bland.
1:20 vocalish synth blips are very cool, very ambiguous, I'd have liked to hear more of them.
At the 2:00 mark the repeating melody is getting too repetitive. It needs some changing/progression to occur badly.
2:15 new synth introudced is jolly and all, but the repeated melody structure is still present, so while it is a new sound, its not new melody-ness detracts from it greatly.
From there song just kind of unbuilds. Poor/lack of outro hurt this.
Overall song sounded more loopy then it did like a song. It has a neat set of sounds, drums are simple, melody is simple, and overall I think this could have done with just a few more detailing, and a slightly tuned up mix.
All in all, not bad but this isn't really a head turner in any way shape or form.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.