Hey I thought this was pretty good man. A couple things though. One, you need much more bass. Either you're not using a bass guitar or bass drum or I just can't hear it, because it is so lacking the extra deep feel to it. Get your drummer hittin the bass more or louder, and get your bass player louder, or if you don't have one find one, NOW. All in all though it was good, the singer sounds sorta like Lenny Kravits.
Thank you for the tips, i do not own a bass, but i was thinking of borrowing one to bass things up (or down i guess). Also, everything is doen by me, so thank you.