I think you've pretty much got this genre nailed
Can NOT wait to here the full song
but i think you should use some fading to, just in and out at completely random moments
AND, without fading, do a sudden stop in the middle of the song and without fading again, just start playing
You gotta get it just right though, when doing that you can have to much or not enough of it
Some things have changed already. the lead had too much resonance on it for what i wanted in this song.
Thanks for reviewing. :)
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