Check out bucknike1, our latest supporter!

We're 12 people from our target today. Why don't you be one of them?

You can support NG too and get tons of perks for just $2.99.

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Author Comments

Let me know what you think.


Pretty neat.

--The intro sounds are pretty neat, but they go on for too long by themselves. Try to mix it up with some subtle changes.
--The building menace of the later intro is pretty sweet, but the fakeness of the lead sound threw me off. Try to make something a little more realistic in later versions, m'kay? I like the concept, but the sound's missing the target. If you're using a real guitar and did something to make it sound like that, it would be a good idea to change it in later drafts.
--When everything comes together, it sounds fantastic! Try a little mix-fixing, though, as the high registers are a little to loud.
--When you switch from the main melody to that noise part, the drums are a little too loud--once again, some mixing would be a good idea.
--Those drums go on for too long, too.
--I like the big finish that comes back to the beginning, although it gets a little messy at points.

Nice work!

GamingLegend7 responds:

Wow, thanks for all the suggestions. I'll be sure to work on it.
Thanks again.

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info

2.30 / 5.00

Jan 17, 2010
7:05 PM EST
General Rock
File Info
6.3 MB
6 min 56 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.