Okay I can say this doesn't sound awesome! I just uploaded it here so you can listen basic idea for this song how I'm gonna remix now, so I should say this is something about demo alright?

So I', remixing it like this way currently and I'm gonna fnish this with your advices, say what needs more work and such things, that I know that volume needs still some work so ignore that and concentrate on other mistakes you would possible notice.

Thanks!