Great

sounds very similar to alot of your songs.
you seem to really like doing the alternating octives.
They DO sound good, but i'd suggest trying somethin new

Incredible melody!

01:05 - LOL awesome!

nice beggining chords (fifths?)

The synths are really nice and relaxing, and the edgy bass gives the song intensity, but still blends with the synths

the edgy bass synth at 1:05 is a bit loud by the time the other synths come in. it just feels sort of crowded at places, and maybe it would help if you turned it down, or leaned it to one side

the drums seem like they could also go a lot farther than they are going, maybe a few drum fills here and there might help

the high synth at the end suggests that the song will go on into a bridge or something, so it felt like the song just ended at the middle. it's really good where it's at, but the ended suggested that something more was going to happen.

some high, smooth, quiet synths in the background would sound nice if you put it in when the edgy synth at 1:05 comes in

i really enjoyed this piece! It's definetly not something i would make (though i don't know anybody that makes music like mine), but the melodies and blend are really nice. Great job! 8/10 4/5

Love your choice in sounds.

Great stuff John! I really like your choice of synths in this. The lead or whatever it is that you have kick in at 1:04 sounds awesome. Love the crunchy tone of it. Catchy melody too. If you could just work in a heavier, more pumpy kick in there this would be rockin.

Only thing I didn't like was the high pitched lead near the end, also the way it ended. Actually really I guess just that whole end sequence in general seemed a bit out of place to me, but the rest was great :).

Awesome..

I really like this, keep it up! :)