Uhhh...
Dude, the beggining is fine but the rest of the song is blank! A mistake it is...
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i hope you enjoy "somthing happened when I uploaded Lava reef so yea its the His world i was working with and had a sound check on it and was gonna put on newgrounds when i was gonna finish around the end of this month *jan 2010*.
im terribly sorry sir but you're mistaken
the song is alright...nothing special, but it's not lava reef...this is his world...
xoshaow3 responds:
Something happened when I uploaded causing it to not play the right song. sorry. The real lava reef was uploaded shortly after this.
Sorta there...
I hear an intro to your tracks, good. There is a synced bass track to your main melody, that's even better. True musical style that varies with the progression of music through it's landscape, awesome. Why did I give you a 5?
Too light on the bass. Listening to this is like nearly finishing a crossword puzzle then having your cat tear the paper to shreds. Your so close to completion but there's a huge gaping hole that makes this piece unfinished and unclean. All through the song I'm waiting for something to happen, you've built it up so well and I've felt so let down. Good work so far, keep it as it is and make your next piece really stand out with it.
Just my humble opinion, you are in the end the artist.
Keep mixing,
- Khonos
xoshaow3 responds:
ty, I will keep mixing. I will also work on this, and try to perfect :) Also asI added in the Authors comments, this wasn't suppose to even be uploaded. I somehow uploaded the wrong file which turned out to be the file i'v been working on and was gonna release the end of this month.
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