It just don't sound natural enough for me to like it. (I like hearing that way because I play Trumpet, Tuba, Harmonica, and alil piano) So if theres a way to make it seem alot less like a synthisizer made it and alot more like the instraments I would love the sound of it a catchy tune indeed. Cheers Minion!
A review is a review
No matter how you look at it.
Well, a very interesting piece by whom I'm sure is a very interesting person, but...
To be completely honest, it's a little too slow for Jazz even as a ballad.
Try speeding up along the way somewhere and changing it from a waltz to a basic 4/4 beat, then back to a slightly Allegretto waltz, giving the song as a whole a little "Kick".
As Is I'd give it a 3/5 - 6/10
I would love to hear it over if you decide to tinker with the song!
Thanks, I cant really agree with the a review is a review part, as I think there is indeed a difference between a helpfull and a unhelpfull review.
Id much rather have a reviewer such as you than someone who just 10s it without reason... Thanks for that!
Ill be sure to do a little fiddling with it, although I dont agree on it being to slow for jazz. However, it certainly could use some more dynamics