I do have to agree
I give you a 7 not because that's what the piece as a whole deserves, but because it almost seems incomplete. There's a uniqueness to the song but it does adhere to a very common stereotype of a horror song.
If you but a beat behind it near the middle of the song to carry it over to the end rather than keep the same tone it'd have made it much better.
The song in my opinion stays the same the whole time. It's not much of a journey. And it's my philosophy that a song isn't just instruments or sounds being coordinated, but instead a song is a journey the artist takes the listener on.
But don't be discouraged by what I said, not by any means. You have a great potential to make great music if you just keep at it! Making music like i described is insanely hard, I can't really manage it myself :p
Keep composing! I'm off to check out more of your stuff!!