yeee, Agreed. This does have potential
Aside being a demo: At first, the change up at 0:21, sounded kinda off-- but it got better. The blips you added in(0:42), and the outra kinda messed with the entire structure of it all too. You might want to try repeating some bars, and just adding in minor change ups; to place a chorus at least. The rhythm and melodies are great-- but just needs to be a little more thought out.
Keep it up bro
thanks for the comment :) appreciate it
i cant make it better :S lost it . but i got a new one now hehe
check it out
not bad cant lie the tempo is good it has alot of potential
Thanks for your post:) appreciate it.