Pretty good
The basis of the lyrics is pretty good, but the lyrics themselves just seem a bit odd. The vocals aren't bad in the lowering ranges, but the weird wavering your voice does in the higher ranges sounds funny... but not bad. The guitar work isn't bad either, I like the progression, I just think some sort of effect needs to be added to give the song a bit more flair.
Now, I by no means want you to think this song isn't good, or that I'm dissing you. It really is a pretty good song. I just figured I'd give my two cents. But, if you like the way everything sounds, F*** what I think, right? Keep rockin' man.