the pad melody is reallllly reminding me of an old Ministry of Sound hit from a few years back. grooooovin' latin-style bassline.
the drums are a little boring though, not enough change-up. try using two different hi-hat/percussion loops and switching between the two every 8-16 bars. and fill loops help a -lot- for adding excitement to the rhythm section. :)
not a big fan of the synth you bring in at 3:00 or so in. doesn't seem very suited to the other sounds.
good effort on trying to create a breakdown but it falls a bit flat. really, you don't need much advice as it sounds like you're on the right track. :) you just need more play and practice!
good work, man. :)