HAHAHA LMAO (literally) !!!
I can see what you were trying to do and it kinda worked - but it was not quite there. I do like the main hook tho and the way it layers up and breaks down.
PEOPLE LISTEN ALL THE WAY THROUGH - DON'T JUDGE IN THE !ST FEW SECONDS
Anyway, i think it could do with some EQing and compression tho...
Thank you for the reply. I'll try to fix it up.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.