Alot better than your other stuff.
But, still need to work majorly on your tones/notes, you make everything mismatch.
This is what I do to help myself, grab a guitar find what notes are where and find stuff that sounds... okay. Transform to FL, add effects with different variants of those sounds.
I don't like it. And come on, if its a test, why upload it? You expect people to judge your practice? Uhh... No.
It's not practice, by test I mean a test as in a REAL test, to see how other people like it, and what to improve on, et cetera. If you don't like it, cool, but can you please post some constructive criticism? EDIT: I know "test" is vague, but I mean a test as in something that gets graded.
Use good sounds
In trance, most important is SOUND! U can make awful melody, but with nice sounds and this will be good.... Downoad VSTi plugins in ur FL, for example NEXUS, Z3TA+, MASSIVE.
ur bassline is not bad, but very little and without good sounds... improve please and PM me, OK =)
PS : I vote 5
4.63 / 5.00 (+ 0.63)
You gave this submission a vote of "5"
Thanks for the review, it means a lot to me. I'll be sure to get better plugins. Remember, this was more of a test, so I didn't spend hours on it, it would be a lot more complex if I was trying harder.