arggg

im addicted to this song. Not a bad thing tho. Love the little variation at 0:25

Goes in a direction I disagree with.

I love how it starts out, and the synths are all well chosen/altered. They sound great together - good bounce going on. I definitely think the right choice was made in the delivery of the vocals. The somewhat monotonous french accent gave the song a little added flavor (because aesthetically, the song is ALL about flavor).

I'm not crazy about the short, jumpy chords you began using in the second verse, and I found the higher toned synth that appeared around the same time sounded a bit too pattern-oriented for my liking. I would have liked it if it floated around, hitting different notes to sound less like a pattern and more like an instrument jamming.

A couple of notes on the vox: I think the "semi-colonoscopy" line should have been dragged to just after "stick me on a tree" (no pause). I noticed that you did it in the second verse, but I still think it ends the verses nicer, especially the first one because it gives you the added time to build up the song.

I didn't like the speech synth at the end :(
It took me out of the song. While everything else felt polished, the speech synth sounded less like it fit in with the song.

As you know, I love the lyrics. Well written, cool use of playing with words and metaphors. Excellent work.

Basically: I really like the song, but I feel like it went in a different direction from where I was hoping -- once you heard the first verse you've pretty much heard it all. I would have enjoyed a slight break from the main melody. A small bridge or something.

I hope I don't sound too harsh. The reason behind my criticism is I like the song enough to know it could be more than it is.

different but still amazing

First off i like the french accent you added in there, im guessing it's supposed to be a bit silly lol. Also i see you used some C64 sounds, and you used it well. Nice work, keep it up!

:)