w00t.

this song is pretty cool. i'd like to see it made into like a full lengthed song , cant wait for the finish. this sounds like an awesome song already. the bass adds that nice effect to the melody. i like the disonant sound of the beeps too. the drums arent the best in the world, but they're good enough.

hm

nice bassline i really liked it.
first off, half listen to that guy that first reviewed it.
make the chorus sound a little more like...
16 bit.

use a 3Xosc and fool around with it until it sounds painfully buzzy, then add hardcore destructive distortion to it.

and there ya go.
16 bit lead.

The bassline is god, so it should stay, and try also adding some nice, softer distortion to the drums.

for the 'old chunky' feel.

good luck man. im actually not gonna help you on this one.
>:D

theblackhawk--_--

Eh......???

Other stuff I'd like to see in it? I dunno, perhaps something that sounds like Nintendo? After all, what good is a Nintendo Rave without some kickin' NES beats?
I'm not really sure what that particular grouping of obnoxious noises was supposed to be, but it aint for me man.....although, I applaud you on your effort.