Didn't work for me
I'll give you gredit for having good vocals and for keeping a good rythem but it sounded like you were trying to get some tracks to compliment and some to contrast.
Very nice song :) Haha I actually recently released a song with vocals :P
Really good vocals, everything fit very well :)
Overall I would've liked to see a longer song and would've downloaded if it were longer, but really great music man!
Keep it up!!
Check out some of my songs please!