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Serenity -JR-Sayer-

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This song... I don't know how to explain it. It just came out. In my opinion, it's the best song I've written so far, so I hope you enjoy it. I made this piece smooth and focus on emotion, unlike my other submissions which have a tendency to be more "imposing" than anything else. Again, I hope you enjoy, and if you want to, please the story that unfolds in your head when you hear this song.
NOTE: Constructive criticism is more than welcome. Ads and flaming are not.


Yeah, it's alright.

You have a good sound but I think you should get more instrumetns in there, make it more out there. Don't bother playing it safe with a couple of instruments, really just go crazy and take a chance.
And trust me, you'll do better.
But yeah, it's pretty chill but really boring, 3/5.

Good Base, but to dull.

I'd give you a 9 if it were more flexible. It's way to plain, like nothing happens. Put some "action" in your songs. Like different instruments and stuff. You'll get the hang of it, I promise. I can tell it won't take to long either.

I love the instrument, though. What did you use?

RayJones321 responds:

The instrument was Synthetic, it was merely the STR_Ensemble Soundfont, with Piano underlying it.

As for the song needing more "action", I must respectfully disagree. This song is not about Action. It is about emotion, more specifically, Love. I wanted people to be able to figure that out by themselves, but sooner or later I was going to have to tell someone. I see where you were getting that from - This song is NOTHING like my other submissions. In saying that it needs more instruments, I chose only the strings and the piano so that I had two instruments combining to become one Song of emotion, like Love. It's simplicity is, in my opinion, the Best way to present it.
Thanks for the review.


Defintley Relaxing

"Walking on a hill somewhere in the middle of nowhere, somewhat a cloudy day, not too bright not too dark, but just right".
Very nice my friend.

RayJones321 responds:

Glad that it got that kind of reaction. I really appreciate your review, thanks. :)

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3.55 / 5.00

Jan 11, 2010
10:49 PM EST
File Info
5.1 MB
2 min 15 sec

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