Pacy and driven
I think that this piece certainly has a lot of potential going for it. The way that it all seems to stand ready for something else to take over, I would say that there is just a certain something lacking, which does need to be addressed. Let's focus on what we have so far:
1) A decent beat, with some good instruments in there.
2) A good vocal sample, which works well as an introduction.
3) Good crowd noises - always good for the Techno crowd, as it tells them when to make some noise, as opposed to bouncing up and down.
From this, I'd say that it needs to have some sort of solo in it, possibly with a deeper quality. Listen to tracks like Zombie Nation and you'll hear what I'm thinking of with the solo / chorus parts there. From messing with the sound of the tune and possibly adding a few different vocal samples in, you'll end up with a much better sounding piece.
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