Interesting, but a bit repetitive at points
The biggest problem in general with songs, but especially with trance tracks, is variety. Things often end up sounding like a loop.
I'm not saying it's too big a problem on this track, you've actually managed to keep it quite varied, but the general feel of the song is marked by repetition. The main reason might be that the rhythm doesn't change much, and even though there is change in the melody, it generally sounds a lot like the same thing over and over, maybe because of the isntruments used.
Also, the outro, the simple fade-out, I always find to be the simple, lazy way out. If you could get an actual end to it, that'd work better.
As a trance song, it should be easy to... dance to? I've read the previous reviews, and I guess it could do with some more of this "oomph" they speak of. Generally more catchy?
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Thanks for the review!
As I've said in some of my other responses, I agree with the issues pointed out, and will definitely keep them in mind in the future. I'm sorry I can't be more elaborate with my feedback, but the issues brought up seem to be the same ones, so you could probably just read one of the other responses :P
Could I ask why you reviewed this song and not the Edit? Was it just because it's the edit of this one? I had just thought that the edit was the actual RRC one and this one was optional/additional. I only ask because this has received two reviews now, for a total of four, whereas the other received one, which is it's only one, so I know it's not related to quantity of reviews.
well its good but not great :(
it deserves a 7
-Song-\It was ok but it was just the same thing through the whole thing.But a little bit after the 1 minute mark it stated to change up a little.I don't know what rave sounds like,but if it is spose to sound really smiler to techno then you nailed it.I liked listening to the song with the transitions on which makes everything real jumpy .The angry faic I like the most with every song for some reason.I liked the ending though.How it fades away bu it is still real up beat.It would of been real good with vocals.You should use this song as a background song with some vocals
Any way it needed more oomph or something.And more different sounds.
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Thanks for the review!
We would absolutely love to have vocals in our songs, but unfortunately, I can't sing and my bandmate is more or less a metal singer.
As for the repetition, the composition of the song seems pretty varied to me, especially in comparison to some of our others songs and songs of the same genre, so I'm guessing you mean the er, notes of the lead, in particular? I hadn't really noticed that until now, but it's definitely something to work on.
Thanks again :)
needs more umph
Does it? Hm.
I'll keep that opinion in mind!
The other member here: I don't convey very much energy when writing songs. It may have something to do with the fact I write many of them late at night, but I know exactly what you mean. As far as our songs go, I think this one is the most "umphful", but still nothing special.
Its good tho it more a of a trance song i think, or at least thats what it feels like. Like it should be a rave rather than a club. It's good tho!
GOOD CALL. I changed it. :3
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