Interesting, but a bit repetitive at points
The biggest problem in general with songs, but especially with trance tracks, is variety. Things often end up sounding like a loop.
I'm not saying it's too big a problem on this track, you've actually managed to keep it quite varied, but the general feel of the song is marked by repetition. The main reason might be that the rhythm doesn't change much, and even though there is change in the melody, it generally sounds a lot like the same thing over and over, maybe because of the isntruments used.
Also, the outro, the simple fade-out, I always find to be the simple, lazy way out. If you could get an actual end to it, that'd work better.
As a trance song, it should be easy to... dance to? I've read the previous reviews, and I guess it could do with some more of this "oomph" they speak of. Generally more catchy?
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