Volume seemed low?
This is notbad. its really short though, but guess thats why its a loop, but even for a loop its really short you should ad abit of depth to it by making it longer and adding more sounds into it, also i noticed the sound quality was abit low. maybe record it at a higher volume or something, but still the "TUNE" you do have is pretty good just way too short, so as suggested adding abit more to it more depth with a few more sounds and instraments, would do the trick, but for what it is, its pretty neat sounding. so hope to hear more from you, more higher quality stuff ofcourse.
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Volume seemed abit low, and the loop itself could have abit more sounds and tunes for more depth