It's good for the time you took to make it
It was good, but i know that you have the potential to make it even better i know you were bored and all that stuff, but i just recommend you , to put a lot on effort on your next track ( if you are taking this seriously of course ), becuase knowing how "perfect" some users are, they are going to attack this track.
Try to add some harmony, or some other bass that sounds different from the main synth , or even the Original vocals.
Nice ! Good Luck with your other works
Ruben -Acid Paradox-