Ok guys so this is my third attempt at this song, its still not right i don't think, i changed the key to A# added some sound effects, added a guitar solo, spent the best part of an hour mixing it so all the music fitted into each other, pumped up the drums, boosted the low hz on the bass. And yet i still feel its missing something.
Its supposed to show a mans final words, like this guy is on his deathbed, and his life is flashing before his eyes, he says his final words, trys to fight through the pain, and eventually just kicks it.
But im not sure if im there yet.