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My first song created for my girlfriend, Sarah. I got up off my ass to make this for you. Although it may sound really lame to you guys, I like it, and I hope she does too.
I love you, Sarah.

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PERVOK

2010-09-05 01:21:06

House house

Less reverb on the bass synth, and maybe some other auxiliary percussion for added groove? Don't be afraid to toss in some cool sounding high ended synths either, it doesn't have to be all drums and bassline :)

Try incorporating drops in the music and shit for added emphasis. Like you drop the bassline and you just have the drums for a bit, but maybe putting something like that but with no drums and maybe some cool pads or something before the main section would be pretty dope and would bring more energy to the track.

Cool beans though, meister.

Everlasting-Elements responds:

Thanks, man. I appreciate the constructive review.

Enteroar

2010-02-17 01:15:29

Weak

Annoying kick D:
nice melody.
no bass lol?
4, 6/10

Everlasting-Elements responds:

You're dope.

Androu1

2010-01-10 07:52:17

I don't really like this kinda music, but...

This is awesome. Good job, man. I bet ya girl liked it.

However, you could've done more from 0:48 to 1:05. I dunno, that part just feels kinda lacking and I think you could've done better.

Really nice, anyway. Keep up the good work.

Everlasting-Elements responds:

I wasn't really sure what to do with this song. I wanted to throw this in and that in, but everytime I tried, it sounded dumb.
I don't know if she liked it or not.

Jaexito

2010-01-10 05:43:34

It's not lame.

It is not lame, I like how it sounds. I guess Sarah is lucky? D:

Everlasting-Elements responds:

I appreciate the review. Thanks.
She can be lucky, depending on how I'm feeling that day. But I guess everyone can be a piss stain, sometimes.